Revise this for me

rom the teacher's notes that I sent you, he said the thesis statement should be the first or last sentence in the paragraph, I don't see that in your revised brief report Amazon and other e-commerce companies forced Brick & Motor stores to establish e-commerce solutions in order to keep their customers. 04:37 profile that's my thesis statement 04:37 profile This paper analyzes the proposition that the growth of e-commerce has forced traditional retail organizations to adopt e-commerce in order to retain their customers. This paper won’t be analyzing any proposition. We are writing a persuasion paper with the sole purpose to convince the reader that your argument (thesis statement) should be agreed with. Suggest that you rewrite your introduction to be focused on your thesis statement. From this assignment on you should be writing only to persuade your reader to agree withyour thesis statement or you are wasting your time 04:39 profile those were also his notes. please look at attachment labeled "teacher notes" all the red line on the left hand side is the area where his comments are. if this part is messed up, the rest of the paper will be messed up. remember we are working towards to big paper. This week's assignment is the literature review, but the teacher's notes needs to be fixed in order for the literature review to be fixed because next week the literature review will be added to the rest of the work you were doing